Sentence examples for manuscript to include from inspiring English sources

Mr. Magner updated his nearly finished manuscript to include material on the disaster.

XD revised the manuscript to include important intellectual content.

We have made the following improvements to the manuscript to include more quantitative descriptions.

Further details are added to the revised manuscript to include this information.

We modified the manuscript to include this possibility, be we think this is unlikely.

We have now altered the manuscript to include this work (last paragraph of the Results).

In another surprising twist, Fauci said he and other members of the WHO group had recommended that the researchers revise their manuscripts "to include new data and elicit clarifications of old data" and submit them to NSABB, which should reconvene and reconsider the issues.

Final remark Reviewers of our manuscript suggested to include some recent references on impulsive problems.

We also revised our manuscript accordingly to include these new findings.

The search in genomic databases was repeated several times during manuscript preparation to include sequences recently added in NCBI.

The only comment I have to improve on this excellent manuscript is to include a reference about the need for behavioural research (Page 2, paragraph 6),  after "....behavioural determinants is needed" e.g. by Whitby M et al. (2007).