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We thank J. Marešová, E. Landová and O. Šimková for critical reading of the manuscript and help with the data collection, S. Moore and his family from Pennsylvania for a linguistic revision of the manuscript, R. Fuchs for providing literature and all of the anonymous respondents for their participation in this project.

The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2474/11/207/prepub The authors wish to thank Dr. Johanna Schmitt for editing the manuscript and help with the English language.

The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2474/12/69/prepub The authors wish to thank Dr. John Roberts for editing the manuscript and help with the English language.

The authors are grateful to Bloomington Drosophila Stock Center for possibility to carry out the analysis of fly stocks and to Kathy Matthews for critical comments on the manuscript and help during analysis of fly stocks in Bloomington Drosophila Stock Center.

The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2334/13/286/prepub The authors wish to thank Professor Elisabeth Heseltine for critical reading of the manuscript and help in revising the written English and Aurélie Sausy for help in performing the molecular biology experiments.

2) Figure 1 and 2 do not follow the text presentation and in my opinion would benefit the manuscript and help the reader if Figure 1 was made in sequence of panels: Figure1D, 1A, 1B, Figure 2, 1E Figure 2 should then be the fractionation (current Figure 1 C) and Figure 1 figure supplement 2. The text in the results sections should be changed to reflect this.

Tay Hohoff, as she was known, took the manuscript and helped Lee make it into a novel.

SA searched the literature, helped in preparing the manuscript, and helped in the data interpretation.

All authors co-supervised the investigation, conceived of the study, reviewed the manuscript, and helped draft parts.

We are grateful to two anonymous reviewers who gave their time to thoroughly review the manuscript and helped improve it.

HK revised manuscript and helped greatly to draft the manuscript.