The phrase "make it evident that" is correct and usable in written English.
This phrase is used when someone wants to make something clear or to prove a point. For example: The results of the study make it evident that the new drug is effective in treating patients with chronic illness.
Familiarity with Liszt's piano works will make it evident that he was the piano's supreme artist.
The discrepancies, inconsistencies, and logical fallacies in the account of Livy, one of Rome's greatest historians, make it evident that this thesis of a struggle of the orders is a gross oversimplification of a highly complex series of events that had no single cause.
Because Senator Obama appears to be an acutely self-aware individual, and because you make it evident that he has been "paradoxical" for some time now, I'd like to know if he sees himself in a similar fashion — equal parts traditional and unorthodox — or if his self-image is more in line with the evocative rhetoric he uses to describe his candidacy.
The discrepancies, inconsistencies, and logical fallacies in Livy's account of the early republic make it evident that the annalistic tradition's thesis of a struggle of the orders is a gross oversimplification of a highly complex series of events that had no single cause.
The deal postponements and restructurings since the Bear Bust make it evident that the private equity buyout era may be over.
These results make it evident that better articulation among different clusters of growers and other actors should be encouraged, and that diversified and tailor-made extension strategies should be designed to optimally support different clusters of growers.
Peake can't make its sentences clear, but she makes it evident that, however hermetic her outpouring, it is not all bunkum.
Increasing evidence has made it evident that the skeletal and immune systems are connected in complex ways; in fact, it would be difficult to understand either system in depth without the insights afforded by studying their interaction in an osteoimmunological context [ 44].
The Chinese government made it evident that no one is protected from scrutiny within its financial system with the release of a scathing report accusing its e-commerce giant Alibaba of encouraging, and allowing illegal activity.
My time on the M.I.T. campus made it evident that more are undoubtedly on the way.
Ms. Palin made it evident that elected office is no fun.
