The part of the sentence "make a revision" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use this sentence to suggest that someone should review and update something that has already been written. For example: "Please make a revision to the document before submitting it to the client."
If you're super keen you could make a revision timetable.
Aim of the paper was to make a revision on the bone microstructure adaptive mechanisms and function around dental implants and biomaterials.
"Can you imagine how long it took to make a drawing, and then make a revision?" Mr. Alpern, 71, asked a few weeks ago while standing before display cases full of hundreds of vintage drafting instruments at the Avery Architectural and Fine Arts Library at Columbia.
We also make a revision of the absolute configuration of vibralactone B. Open image in new window Fig. 1 Chemical structures of compounds 1 6.
S.B.: We are going to make a revision of the safety scenario of all the plants under extreme conditions of natural calamities.
Mary Gaitskill would like to make a revision.
Instead, Nilsen found himself scurrying back and forth between his Manhattan lab and Madonna's £20m Upper East Side compound every time he made a revision.
Owners modified the policy in May, making a revision that empowered the league to fine a team for any protest by one of its players during the anthem.
With doctors around the country complaining bitterly that the rise in liability insurance premiums is forcing them out of business, Republicans, including President Bush, have made a revision of malpractice law a central part of their tort law agenda.
After developer outcry, media coverage (like ours), and attention from Congress, Apple made a revision to the guidelines to lessen the blow.
This week he makes a revision mission to Merion in order to ready himself for the US Open in the knowledge that he will need a clear mind to contend.
