Sentence examples for made substantive revisions from inspiring English sources
LW drafted the manuscript and DS made substantive revisions.
LW drafted the manuscript and AS and DS made substantive revisions.
DVN, LK, GCES, KC, SP made substantive revisions to the preliminary version.
MW made substantive revisions to various drafts of this manuscript which was prepared for publication by TT.
We have for the past three years or so been operating a policy of 're-review opt-out' [ 5]: authors who have been asked to make substantive revisions to their papers are also asked whether they wish the referees to see the revised version; if not, the decision is made by the editors (more below on how this policy has worked in practice).
RG was involved in the sample selection, interpretation of the data, and made substantive contributions and revisions to the manuscript.
He said Mahler subsequently made substantial revisions.
All authors accept public responsibility for the content of the paper and confirm that they meet the ICJME conditions for authorship, namely that they conceived and planned the work that led to the article or played an important role in interpreting the results (or both), wrote the paper and/or made substantive suggestions for revision and approved the final version of the manuscript.
All authors made substantive comments on the different revisions of the manuscript, and read and approved the final manuscript.
All authors provided critical revisions to the manuscript and made substantive intellectual contributions to the study.
