The phrase "made its entry" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when you want to describe a situation in which something has come into an area or situation in a noticeable or significant way. For example, "The new restaurant made its entry onto the culinary scene with a bang, offering an exciting menu of unique dishes."
Dell has finally made its entry into the Chromebook market official, as it follows in the footsteps of many other PC OEMs who are looking around to shore up flagging Windows machine sales.
Michel Houellebecq's novel Soumission made its entry into the world under conditions that can confidently be declared unprecedented.
The International Skiing Federation was slow to become involved, and freestyle only made its entry as an Olympic exhibition event at Calgary in 1988.
Burma made its entry on to the list for the first time when the Pyu ancient cities were awarded heritage status.
But that was before the financial crash knocked over Greece's fiscal house of cards and made its entry in the European Union's common currency look like one of recent history's gravest blunders.
In the mid-1990's, Balco made its entry into the world of bodybuilding competitions and soon established a second company, Scientific Nutrition for Advanced Conditioning, whose most lucrative product was a combination of zinc and magnesium called ZMA, which was sold in capsules for about $30 a bottle.
Richard, number two at the telecommunication services giant, told French journalist Jean-Pierre Elkabbach that the tablet would soon make its entry into the market, and that it will be equipped with a webcam (gasp!).
It's a move that lets Spacer make its entry into the U.S. market without having to establish its own office and start from scratch.
The Canadian airline Porter Air makes its entry into the United States market this month with daily flights between Newark and Toronto City Center Airport, making a Canadian getaway a breeze.
With the new offering, the company makes its entry into the market of online video management and distribution platforms.
To make its entry, the company is conducting an audacious set of clinical trials that will directly compare its drug to the current market leaders.
