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Mankiewicz's pastiche was fully worked out in the first long draft of the script, the processed prose and epigrams already honed to perfection ("For forty years appeared in Kane newsprint no public issue on which Kane papers took no stand. No public man whom Kane himself did not support or denounce — often support, then denounce").
The scandals in the long draft — some of it, set in Italy during Kane's youth, startlingly like material that came to the screen twenty years later in "La Dolce Vita" — served a purpose beyond crowd pleasing: to show what a powerful man could cover up and get away with.
They had put her father in the ground and her world was shattered, but the nap she'd had in the hired car was like a long draft of cool water — deep and fragrant, washed with an ivory light — the kind of sleep, she would later learn, that came only in the aftermath of many tears.
It's another hard climb out of Monaco on bikes, but back at the campsite, as the evening cools, you can remember the thrill of the racing, the gargantuan yachts and film stars and, away from the dusty crowd and roaring engines, sip a cold drink and take one last long draft of that view.
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He downed the first glass of wine in two long drafts and poured another before the bossy waiter had time to wrest the bottle out of his hand.
While Patrick retreated to the inside line, the others were in long drafting lines, bumper-to-bumper at a hundred and eighty-five miles an hour.
His set included rappers (Lord Nez and Akim Kuzma-Bartz, Mr. Bartz's son), two-saxophone improvisations (with Rene McLean) and long drafts of his improvising over a straight-ahead jazz rhythm section, a kind of demonstration of how to connect the lessons of Charlie Parker and John Coltrane.
Other pages contained long drafts of potential advertisements: "If each household uses a small amount of money and big developers invest, we can change our village into a paradise where tourists can appreciate the plants, climb the Great Wall, and enjoy peasant family meals".
Commencing the novel in 1980, she wrote three long drafts during a four-year period; the final manuscript ultimately contained 1,300 double-spaced pages.
I love gathering together and smack talking during a few hour-long draft.
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