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This lead sentence is a mouthful.
The lead sentence included four different references to Viagra, a clue that it was overstuffed.
This long and complicated lead sentence was awfully hard to digest in one reading.
With 59 words and a remarkable 11 prepositional phrases, this overstuffed lead sentence was awfully hard to digest.
This 50-word lead sentence used more words for the backward-facing introductory clause than it did for the new stuff.
The lead sentence of the third paragraph states that the shootout "leaves many intriguing questions," but then presents these questions as statements.
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Some rules state that your submission must include a certain theme, or even an assigned lead-in sentence.
Pretentious lead sentences are kept, not tossed.
Last December, GateHouse Media sued The New York Times Company, alleging copyright infringement after local sites associated with The Boston Globe, a Times Company newspaper, copied the headlines and lead sentences of GateHouse's newspaper articles.
First, the lead sentences state: "The town of Greenburgh moved a step closer to securing nearly 200 acres of green space this week with the dismissal of a lawsuit trying to stop the acquisition.
But Microsoft's news service robotically grabs just the headlines and lead sentences of stories.
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