But even later drafts were rejected by the studios.
All authors provided input on sections and the addition of appropriate references in later drafts.
That clumsy wording was eradicated in all later drafts, including the one submitted for publication.
All others provided data and comments on later drafts of the manuscript.
(The title changed when the references became less overt in later drafts).
The later drafts I'm more concerned with the art of writing.
The earlier and later drafts of Twitter's S-1 have been released, and aren't all that different from one another.
What I found was that not only did Carson underline, circle, and annotate her sources with particular attention to uncertainty, she amplified its use in later drafts.
In 1941, Woolf wrote a scene that included a lavatory attendant, but later drafts of the same piece contained no sign of her.
This diligence, Shepard once noted in an interview, isn't drudgery, and you can almost imagine him peering at later drafts, ready to joyously crush an anachronism and add a period flourish.
Advocates of a process writing approach to second language writing pedagogy suggest that teachers should focus on content on early drafts before focusing on form on later drafts.
