Regarding adipogenesis in ATF4 knockout mice, we agree and make the following modification to the Discussion's third paragraph: Mice lacking ATF4 are lean and resist diet-induced obesity, although they have adipose tissue (Masuoka and Townes, 2002; Seo et al., 2009; Yang et al., 2004).
As you certainly noted, that paragraph lacks a time stamp.
Second, unlike most texts, transcripts are unstructured, lacking sentence boundary markers and paragraphs.
It also turns the whole second part of the paragraph into a sentence fragment, lacking a subject.
The fifth paragraph in the treaty, however, is lacking in the original form.
Also, in that particular paragraph that lacks my own opinion, I was not sure how I was going to remove some of the in-text citations".
Also, in that particular paragraph that lacks my own opinion, I was not sure how I was going to remove some of the in-text citations because [Researcher] said that those citations made that I was summarizing others' opinions as my opinion.
Without a definite idea of what the main topic is, your paragraph will lack focus and unity.
This nine-page document contains a paragraph on the use of preclinical models in OA, which surprisingly is lacking in the equivalent European guidelines [ 10].
Regarding the first paragraph of the reviewer's comment, we understood that the critique was that some control was lacking.
If these paragraphs occasionally lack the antic touch it is because the world, observed right side up and from left to right, produces something less than mirth.
