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Make it feel conclusive.
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From the American point of view, the script seems quite disorganized and it might not feel conclusive.
It's awkward when an audience isn't sure if you're done or not so make the conclusion of your story feel conclusive.
But nothing felt conclusive.
The end of the third season had felt conclusive enough: not especially definitive, in the spirit of the show -- which rolls along like the Mississippi, or any river of your choice, changing and unchanging -- but leaving its main characters in a moment of peace or possibility or renewed resolve.
Still, it felt concluded, if not conclusive, a finish, if not definitive -- quite in the spirit of the series, which which rolls along like the Mississippi, or any river of your choice, changing and unchanging.
It feels under-lit.
It feels like pressure.
It felt disorganized.
It feels safe.
R: It feels amazing.
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