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Yet as an introductory salvo, the Lerdahl performance was extraordinarily effective.
The chemistry of this introductory salvo comes from crude but effective elements: an overamplified run of screaming notes from an electric guitar; a ravaged, abandoned-looking room shrouded in sinister lighting.
Actually, Deck's opening verse is the highlight here, his introductory salvo ("I bomb atomically/ Socrates' philosophies and hypotheses/ Can't define how I be dropping these mockeries") a set-text for Wu-aficionados and a bombastic counterpoint to an airy RZA beat featuring a rippling vocal sample from the Rance Allen Group's Just Found Me (1975).
As July the Fourth approaches I will listen to "Louder than a Bomb" and reflect on Flavor Flav's introductory salvo, "Picture us cooling out on the Fourth of July.
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The upshot: we're not in Hollywood any more, Toto, and after the introductory adrenaline shot of Suedehead, there's nothing showbusiness-like about the overtly political salvos of Ganglord.
Salvo (salvo.co.uk).
Why this latest salvo?
This opening salvo augurs well.
We like Salvo well enough.
And an opening salvo.
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