Sentence examples for into the redaction from inspiring English sources

I've come up with a short list (which, by the way, it's very important for me to call it a short list -- because a lot of time and effort has been put into the redaction of said list).

All authors participated in the redaction and revision of this manuscript.

All authors participated in the redaction of this article.

LM and JB helped in the redaction of the paper.

FF helped in the redaction of the paper.

AB participated in the CT scan analysis and helped in the redaction of the manuscript.

Martin Widschwendter helped in the analysis of the data and in the redaction of the manuscript.

CF participated in study design, and in the redaction of the final manuscript.

So let's play Guess the Redaction!

"Thus, the redaction makes no sense".

The redaction was widely assumed to be a consequence of  political pressure applied by Beijing.