CR participated in the study design, reviewed the study instruments and edited and reviewed the manuscript.
Upon completion of 16 interviews (Round 1), the instrument was edited for clarity based on subject comments, and the revised instrument was evaluated by a new sample of CD patients (Round 2, n = 4).
Upon completion of 10 interviews (Round 1), the instrument was edited for clarity based on subject comments, and the revised instrument was evaluated by a new sample of UC patients (Round 2, n = 5).
But Ms. Ono also made editorial decisions — some as innocuous as leaving in a count-in; others more drastic, like focusing on previously buried instruments or severely editing the live tracks on "Some Time in New York City" — that have outraged purists.
RH – Participated in designing the study and in vitro testing of tissue impedance instrument and edited the manuscript.
US provided input on the design of the study, assisted in designing the data-collection instrument, and edited the manuscript extensively.
Peer review is considered 1) a screening instrument which lets some material through the gates but refuses entry to other submittals, and 2) an editing instrument that turns articles allowed through the gates into better-written or better-edited texts.
The student survey was derived from other instruments, reviewed and edited by educational and child development experts, pilot tested by 10 children ages 6 7 for readability and length, and time tested to ensure completion within 5 7 minutes.
R.R. participated in the study and instrument design and reviewing and editing of the manuscript.
Add to that dozens upon dozens of days in studios in Halifax, Ottawa, and Paris doing overdubbing, recording new instruments, making edits, changes, and mixes.
