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In the second version, the shift from first to third person indicates that effort of sympathy.
In the second version, Bozo utters the offensive words himself, causing the show to be canceled.
Ramzi Ahmed Yousef, who led the 1993 attack, was initially named in the second version.
In the second version the writing is less diffuse, but the substance remains the same.
The actor Bernard Cribbins, who was in the second version of The Plank, said: "He will be very sadly missed.
In the second version, the golf balls turn into lotto balls and the friends conduct a mock lottery drawing.
In addition, van Gogh made a number of little improvements in the second version, at the Phillips.
And in the second version she became… "How could anybody like her? / Such a rude and disobedient little kid!/So we said 'Why don't we fix her?
In the second version (see Wednesday night's scorching by the Nets and more of the same last week in Toronto), the team's effort has been barely visible.
In the first, the emphasis falls on "up", whereas by breaking with the metre in the second version it falls on "tear" and "country".
It's just, not just, but it's a question of reinstating some of the things that were taken out in the second version.
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