The phrase 'in the revised draft' is correct and can be used in written English.
You could use it when referring to changes that have been made to a draft of a written document. For example: "For the purposes of clarification, I am including a revised draft of the article that includes some additional information."
He said "it behooves" the next administration to incorporate the range of different issues in the revised draft.
While the figures in the revised draft aimed to ease the concerns of several key senators, there was no indication that the sponsors had abandoned their plan to make steep cuts to Medicaid through a per capita cap.
Information on sub lethal poisoning was completely bypassed in the revised draft environmental impact statement (RDEIS) released this past October.
In the revised draft, we have included a p50 immunoblot in Figure 4C.
It is described in more details in the revised draft and in new Additional File 1. 7.
In the revised draft, we have included a representative panel in Figure 4E to demonstrate complete shift-ablation upon using both the antibodies.
Lawsky, who had explained the department's process for developing virtual currency regulation at Money 20/20 in early November, said the revised draft would be posted on the department's Web site soon, opening the way for a new round of comments.
While Birth to Three Matters has been replaced by the more general Early Years Foundation Stage Department of Educationn (DOE) 2012), The failure to specifically refer to infants and toddlers was a major critique of respondents to the revised draft of the EYFS in England (Goouch and Powell 2013).
Public and official comments on the draft led to some revisions, including additional technical studies and new alternatives, hence the revised draft.
If the revised draft wins approval at the conference, it is then submitted to the national governments for possible ratification.
