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Further, we have clearly stated in the Introduction (paragraphs 3 and 4) the information derived from previous studies, the questions left unanswered, and subsequently the results of the current study.
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Potential risk factors were studied resulting, as mentioned in the introduction paragraph, in 5 independent risk factors in the hearing loss prediction model and in 9 factors in the prediction rule for academic or behavioral limitations [ 5, 6]. Figure 1 and 2 show patient flow charts of the inclusion and assessment.
In the revised version of the manuscript, we acknowledge these papers and refer to them either in the Introduction (second paragraph) or Discussion (third paragraph).
To clarify the terminology, we added an explanation in the Introduction (second paragraph).
In the Introduction, second paragraph, 'Necessity Concern framework' should have read 'Necessity Concern Framework'.
This work is now cited and discussed in the Introduction (second paragraph) and the Discussion (twelfth paragraph1152 1162).
We have changed the previous statement on optimal information processing to a general sentence on existing work about avalanches and improved information processing in the Introduction (second paragraph).
As advised by the reviewers, we have endeavored to more clearly relate the present study to our previously published Pratama et al. (2013, Immunity) findings (citation in Materials and methods, Mice section and new text in the Introduction, last paragraph).
The corrected reference citations in the text are as follows: On the second page, in the Introduction, second paragraph, second line, Leong, Hau, Tse, & Loh 2008 should read Leong, Tse, Loh, & Hau, 2008.
In the version of this article that was originally published (Laha et al. 2017) the authors did not properly reference one paragraph in the Introduction section, specifically the paragraph:.
Please check the third paragraph in the introduction with the third paragraph in the page four.
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