JPH participated in the concept of the study and in substantive revision of the manuscript.
MAT participated in the design of the study, the analysis of the data and in substantive revision of the manuscript.
Jaffe writes in his report that the draft is "an extremely important collection, representing, in effect, the genesis of the novel, with approximately 92 of the 145 pages in this collection bearing substantive revisions by the author".
But in at least one briefing last fall, Mr. Carney said both the White House and the State Department collectively made just one change, in contradiction to the e-mails that show much more substantive revisions proposed by the State Department.
In turn, those who want the laws changed have funneled their money into Spanish advertisements, in an attempt to keep the governor from winning a rhetorical victory with Latinos without offering what they consider substantive revisions.
The most substantive revisions were to the data from the first quarter of 2012.
Two substantive revisions have been made, to South Korea (from 88% to 73%) and to Mexico (from 66% to 79%).
MR, WE and EJ provided substantive revisions to the manuscript.
Lawmakers on Capitol Hill are drafting substantive revisions for the financial regulatory system.
Dickson and Sauter don't change their models often; Sauter estimates they've made just five substantive revisions over the past five years.
