Sentence examples for in subsequent drafts from inspiring English sources

I suspect that in subsequent drafts he'll find the right words to flesh these characters out.

The scene King put in, would, in subsequent drafts, go on to drive the whole story: Danny waking up next to a one-night stand, stealing her money and leaving her infant son wandering about with a full nappy, reaching for drugs on the coffee table.

Though Gessen later describes the ways in which Harbach improved the novel in subsequent drafts ("more compact, less sentimental, funnier"), I think it's fair to say that a lightness of tone and style (and to a lesser extent of subject matter) has persisted into the published version of the book.

Perhaps originally it really was Billy behind every black eye and broken rib, and this was toned down in subsequent drafts, because Billy never does get sorted out, and Sarah never leaves him, and somehow that becomes vaguely acceptable, just another messed-up way of living.

The theorization of written feedback in this paper aims not only to provide academic writing instructors with a framework that would be helpful in casting their feedback according to students' ZPD, but it will also help provide more explicit feedback in subsequent drafts, if implicit feedback does not work.

In subsequent drafts, Blackmun suggested drawing the line after the first trimester.

BJK developed the PDG-ACE algorithm and helped in subsequent drafting of the manuscript.

All authors have discussed all points in the first draft and in all subsequent drafts.

In the subsequent drafts, the core of young players on this season's Rangers roster joined the organization.

At the third stage, the tutees are supposed to enact feedback and adopt revisions in their subsequent drafts.

DHP critically reviewed the article for intellectual content and was involved in drafting subsequent drafts of the manuscript.