In subsequent drafts the current formulation was adopted.
I suspect that in subsequent drafts he'll find the right words to flesh these characters out.
Though Gessen later describes the ways in which Harbach improved the novel in subsequent drafts ("more compact, less sentimental, funnier"), I think it's fair to say that a lightness of tone and style (and to a lesser extent of subject matter) has persisted into the published version of the book.
The scene King put in, would, in subsequent drafts, go on to drive the whole story: Danny waking up next to a one-night stand, stealing her money and leaving her infant son wandering about with a full nappy, reaching for drugs on the coffee table.
Perhaps originally it really was Billy behind every black eye and broken rib, and this was toned down in subsequent drafts, because Billy never does get sorted out, and Sarah never leaves him, and somehow that becomes vaguely acceptable, just another messed-up way of living.
The theorization of written feedback in this paper aims not only to provide academic writing instructors with a framework that would be helpful in casting their feedback according to students' ZPD, but it will also help provide more explicit feedback in subsequent drafts, if implicit feedback does not work.
In subsequent drafts, Blackmun suggested drawing the line after the first trimester.
In addition, the relationship between Holman and the FBI agents grew stronger in subsequent drafts.
The original draft was grimmer, including details about the previous death of Gwyneth's younger brother, but in subsequent drafts the story became more of a "romp".
Maybe this was changed in subsequent drafts of the report, maybe it was not, but using the term Wall Street to describe the financial system generally is -- most objective observers would conclude -- a political statement rather than an accurate one.
