Furthermore, this study included discussion of issues up until mid-2011 in relation to the developments around CAMR, Paragraph 6, and developments globally on drug access.
We have greatly elaborated on prior work as suggested by the reviewers, including citing an additional 8 references and adding three paragraphs in relation to the historical context of computational simulation of AFPs, with particular mention of the work from Nada and Furukawa.
The permission framework for shale gas exploration says: In the case of an application for planning permission for development consisting of the winning and working of oil or natural gas (including exploratory drilling)— (a the applicant is not required to serve a notice under paragraph (2)(a) in relation to any land which is to be used solely for underground operations.
Each paragraph has a particular topic in relation to the main idea of the reading.
To explain such direct data in relation to the presented conclusions, I have added a few paragraphs to the Results section.
Finally, upon the reviewer's comment on Tom Ray's Tierra, we added a paragraph to explicitly acknowledge his study in relation to the current study.
To the best of our knowledge, the studies referred to in the previous paragraph are the only ones that investigated childhood adversities in relation to age-dependent onset risks of multiple psychiatric disorders.
A third paragraph discusses the role of foresight or future-oriented analysis in relation to choices in technology and innovation focus.
In research, fieldworker training activities are often developed in response to specific project needs, and lack a standardized approach in relation to important cross-cutting skills (importantly including the 'soft skills' described in the previous paragraph).
This has been better clarified in relation to the methods (the study population) and relation to other data sources included in the first paragraph of the discussion.
