Larry Siems has edited the diary sympathetically and intelligently, using litigation and reports to fill in redactions whenever possible.
An earlier version was blanketed — smothered — in redactions; now that we have seen more, it is hard to tell what the national security justification for that was, unless you are Dick Cheney and/or think that anything that affects the C.I.A.'s morale harms national security.
"To date, Gov. Snyder has cherry-picked documents to disclose and shielded himself in redactions and FOIA exemptions, and as a result critical pieces of the record are still missing," Cummings said in a statement Tuesday.
VI, AG, LC-L, BG, EM and GH all participated in the design and in the redaction of the first draft of the article, corrected and approved the final version.
CK participated in the study design and in the redaction of the draft and the final manuscript.
RL and AL participated in the design of the study, in the redaction of the manuscript, and critically reviewed the text.
AB participated in the CT scan analysis and helped in the redaction of the manuscript.
Martin Widschwendter helped in the analysis of the data and in the redaction of the manuscript.
The possibility exists that the different frequencies that Mexican versus US Spanish texts exhibit within the same question-and-answer genre were motivated, at least in part, by the time spent by students in the redaction of their assignments.
