Sentence examples for in my first draft from inspiring English sources
In my first draft for the book, the characters were stick figures.
"In my first draft, I had the elephant sitting on Obama's head," he says.
In my first draft, I described Ms. Deschanel's performance on "New Girl" as "criminally annoying".
"In my first draft, I had the elephant sitting on Obama's head," the Argentine artist Liniers says.
But I had included lyrics from Space Oddity, Life on Mars and Changes in my first draft.
In my first draft, I had eliminated the character of the narrator (a friend of the Ruedas), used a minimum of dialogue (this was a relief after Liaisons) and tried to tell the story almost entirely in images.
After editing, she'd add her initials to the file's name; its name changed in my First Drafts folder, too, so I knew she was finished with it.
In mid-August, I printed out my first draft and made a bonfire in the garden of my photocopy.
But going back to your question I told him: "You have my first draft in your hands, so let's get together and I'll take your notes and see what changes we should make".
On drafts: "My first draft usually approximates somebody in the midst of an epileptic seizure".
