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Harrower likes to nudge offstage major developments in her narration — marriages, deaths, divorces.
And when the empath herself steps in, her narration is so mentally and linguistically chaotic that we're left baffled: "All the things you want since we've lived here make my insidehalf and outsidehalf feel invisible," she reproaches her sister.
Plus, it's not even that weird, as she says in her narration: "I know this is hella random… but, you know, some people collect rocks, what the fuck is the point of that?" Indeed.
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I felt as though she'd created a very sassy (but evidently shy) character in Lara which wasn't reflected in much of her narration.
Her rage remains fresh, yet there's little sense of emerging danger or keen insight in her insistent narration.
I make no apologies for being egotistical because I am," Sybylla intones in her opening narration, with a characteristically smug, holier-than-thou temperament that makes her one of the most memorable characters in Australian cinema.
There are far too many words: her original short story is a model of economy, but where most librettists pare down their sources, Proulx too often expands hers, adding explanations and back story, even whole scenes, that are not to be found in her original narration.
Long phrases of her narration in the third act were feather-light and gentle, flowing from note to note with complete ease, producing an effect of extraordinary peace.
Mrs. Kennedy, conscious of compiling the first draft of history, has copy approval, and one of the more abrasive touches of the film is the manner in which she halts her narration of events to apply a touch of whitewash.
When the protagonist of my novel "The Secrets of Mary Bowser" is freed from slavery and sent to Philadelphia to be educated in a private school, her narration becomes peppered with new words, which she uses for the sheer pleasure of reminding herself that she now knows them.
The following year, Thompson appeared in the surreal comedy drama Stranger than Fiction, playing a novelist whose latest character (played by Will Ferrell) is a real person who hears her narration in his head.
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