A later draft was also discussed in depth with the whānau/family researchers, comparing findings with those from the whānau/family interviews, published previously [ 24].
That clumsy wording was eradicated in all later drafts, including the one submitted for publication.
Early drafts of the script had Khan as a shadowy tyrant leading a planet in revolt; later drafts added the "Genesis device" which Khan would steal.
In a later part of the draft cleared for release to the 5-Eyes countries, the document suggests there may be circumstances in which Australia, Canada and New Zealand should co-operate to allow the US to target their citizens.
But I loved him so much that in the later drafts he became really big.
According to the farmer, who was a representative of one of the farmers' associations, this had been a written justification in an early draft of the new Rural Development Programme but was deleted in later drafts.
Dickinson seems to have preferred "instant" over "sudden" in later drafts of the poem, but when it appeared in the second edition of her work, edited by Todd and Higginson, a comma materialized in the spot where the question mark had gone.
(The title changed when the references became less overt in later drafts).
Although not included in the agreement this week, the idea of extending the 2percenttaxax to other financial mechanisms was discussed and could be included in later drafts.
What I found was that not only did Carson underline, circle, and annotate her sources with particular attention to uncertainty, she amplified its use in later drafts.
