Sentence examples similar to improvements since the initial version from inspiring English sources

Windows Live Photo Gallery beta is an improvement on the initial version of Photo Gallery they shipped with Windows Vista now made for XP as well.

My main comment is that I wish to congratulate the authors for the remarkable improvement of their manuscript compared to the initial version.

Although the final version did not undergo test-retest, the changes to the instruments likely would produce the same or better results than the initial version because of the improvements.

Since the paper was an initial rejection, and since the revised work is now quite different from the initial version, the reviewers and managing editor made the decision to treat this as a new submission.

This Annex should be repealed since its purpose of serving as a basis for drawing up the initial version of the Recommendation(13) has been fulfilled.

This Annex should be repealed since its purpose of serving as a basis for drawing up the initial version of the Recommendation on Relevant Product and Service Markets has been fulfilled.

Corresponds to the initial version of SEMPRE.

Compared to the initial version, I find that the modifications introduced following the suggestions of the three referees have resulted in a very significant improvement of the manuscript.

The 2010 evaluation of the initial version found wide acceptance of the need for the risk of bias tool, with a consensus that it represents an improvement over methods previously recommended by the Collaboration or widely used in systematic reviews.

Also, due to a mistake on my part, the initial version of this post included the wrong planned launch date and has since been corrected.

M.R. and T.S. wrote the initial version of the paper.