Aside from community, lore and improved narrative flow was the priority for story content designer Ryan Paradis, who describes his perfect Taken King player experience to me as: "Today, I learned so much about the Destiny universe... now, I understand so much more".
Although Mr. Shimizu, who has the most sinuous, seductive horror-movie style this side of Brian De Palma, supplies some deep chills in "The Grudge," this new version of the story sacrifices the surreal intensity of the original for the sake of improved narrative clarity.
Training using clinical material developed pattern recognition skills while training using art developed skills of emotional recognition, increased empathy, improved story and narrative and helped them identify multiple perspectives.
Still, more specific references in endnotes would have strengthened the book's authority, and in some places would have improved the narrative's flow.
The new episodes start well, then keep improving, with narrative clarity and a fresh visual beauty.
Stanton storyboarded a group of new scenes and cut them into the film to convince Disney — or, as he put it, to "preëmptively prove" — that they would hugely improve the narrative.
Without a text to work from, it must be tempting to introduce a little white lie here and there: an evocative detail, say, or a new sequence of events to improve the narrative?
HARRY is a computer tutor, designed to assist children improve their narrative writing, focusing particularly upon grammar and style.
In their place, a new trio (Brian Duffield, Akiva Goldsman, Mark Bomback) has done serious surgery to "Insurgent," streamlining the story line, changing key plot points, inventing critical elements and in general improving the narrative flow.
Reducing merit aid would also improve the narrative around college -- that going to college is the privilege itself and a form of merit aid as opposed to the current narrative that attending college is an entitlement whereby the merit aid is the privilege.
