"improve the presentation of" is a correct and usable phrase in written English.
It means to make something look better or more appealing in terms of how it is presented or displayed. Example: The designer was hired to improve the presentation of the company's annual report by adding more visual elements and organizing the information in a more visually appealing way.
To present a novel and simple graphical approach to improve the presentation of the treatment ranking in a network meta-analysis (NMA) including multiple outcomes.
The BWF said it is a drive to improve the presentation of players at major tournaments.
The author forwards his heartfelt gratitude to two anonymous reviewers for their careful reading of the manuscript and their helpful comments that improve the presentation of this work.
Now the race is on for mobile operators to improve the presentation of their content services before the hordes of MVNOs and CE companies launch rival offerings.
We report principles that will improve the presentation of reviews, and discuss the benefits of the new design over the traditional presentation of online reviews.
Although there is a lot of room for interpretation and debate of language and concepts, the hope is that a forthright discussion of ambiguities and infelicities should eventually improve the presentation of evolution to the public.
In this article, we discuss the goals of online customer reviews and develop practical, actionable principles that can be used to improve the presentations of customer reviews.
The authors thank the anonymous referees for invaluable comments and suggestions which improved the presentation of this manuscript.
The authors thank the referees for valuable comments and suggestions which improved the presentation of this manuscript.
Analyses showed that using electronic outlining for planning and writing significantly improved the presentation of the argumentative structure.
Rachel Brown edited my English of the first version of the entry and improved the presentation of the arguments in numerous ways.
