'immense industry' is a correct and usable phrase in written English.
You can use it to describe a particular industry or person's work ethic, or to express the level of effort and hard work that is often required to achieve a particular goal. For example: "John displayed immense industry in his quest to become a professional athlete."
"We created an immense industry".Much of this vision now lies in tatters.
I'm being a bit salacious here, admittedly, but even so, I couldn't reconcile this with the Arnold Bennett described by Virginia Woolf as a "materialist", who writes novels as crammed to excess as the omelette that bears his name and "spend[s] immense skill and immense industry making the trivial and the transitory appear the true and the enduring".
By the time of his death The Timess estimation of Walpole was no higher than, "he had a versatile imagination; he could tell a workmanlike story in good workmanlike English; and he was a man of immense industry, conscientious and painstaking".
It can, like England, make limitless use of the immense industries of the United States.
It is natural that the immense PR industry should have been created in the most free of societies, the United States and Great Britain.
When they are off the drugs and away from the dirt, the best horses that America's immense racing industry can produce seem to be, by international standards, pretty average.
Despite immense financial industry pressure, regulators in both the U.S. and the EU will be panicked by investor and political disapproval of HFT and will rein it in with draconian rules and controls.
Without giving too much away, the film literally peels back the whole structure and process guiding our country's immense food industry to expose corruption, restraint of trade, and the willful withholding of information from the public as to what they're actually consuming.
A true renaissance man, brought to the industry immense knowledge and savvy.
Gazprom controls one-fifth of the world's natural gas reserves and nearly one-quarter of world production, and it is considered a crown jewel of the immense Russian energy industry.
In other cases structure is dictated by reality, as with Lucy Raven's imposing if also tedious "China Town," a photographic animation with sound that follows the production of copper wire from the mines of Nevada to the factories of China, and in the process reveals landscapes devastated and lives diminished by the brute power and immense scale of industry.
