"immense advances" is correct and usable in written English.
It means to progress quickly or to make great improvements. Example: The company has made immense advances in their technology over the past few months.
The first has been immense advances in computer power and a relentless decline in its price.
But it seemed clear that the immense advances in technology would take care of much labour.
The immense advances in science and technology achieved in ancient China are graphically illustrated by the DIS.
The ability of DNA to store genetic information has underpinned immense advances in understanding cell function and provided the foundation for virtually all biotechnology.
Whereas the al-Qaeda of the early 2000s once exploited holes in the U.S. immigration system to commit attacks, today's terrorist networks have realized that those loopholes have long since been closed by immense advances in the U.S. vetting and immigration procedures.
Despite these immense advances, biochemical approaches relying on the relative abundance of peptides in the mammalian hypothalamus did not lead to the identification of neuroendocrine hormones that control body weight, and endocrine factors that potently stimulate body fat loss have since remained unknown.
The restoration of a more normal civilian life in Syria would be an immense advance.
Yet the development of such a drug would almost certainly be an immense medical advance.
Pop culture's patrons, youth and a large number of those who were formerly young, have rewarded it with immense riches, advancing it further.
But while nanotechnology's promise remains immense — the potential advances in energy, medicine and information technology have attracted billions of dollars in government and private investment in recent years — it is not yet clear which patents will prove valuable.
Advances in heterophase materials have been the key in the immense technological progress surrounding us, from bone implants to efficient power plants to lighter cars.
