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Set up conflicts in her character that will be impediments to her achieving her goal.
Her achieving sister, the reigning monarch of the family, had plundered all of their parents' attention for herself.
It is run by Ana Rees, whose love for Wales and Welsh culture led to her achieving a degree in the subject.
"They said to me, there is no way this girl could be achieving at the level you have her achieving at and be using cocaine," Mr. Gaghan said.
At last we have a full-on story: a character with a goal – and an obstacle in the way of her achieving that goal.
She has already ticked off the first of those three goals and nobody who has followed the teenager's story so far would bet against her achieving the other two.
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"That helped her achieve authority".
And Adam's the one who helps her achieve this.
And they help her achieve her aim of being taken out of school.
And she expects her boyfriend, Jason, to help her achieve that victory.
And she was attracted to men who could help her achieve this life.
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