The phrase "has been substantially revised" is grammatically correct and can be used in written English.
It is typically used when discussing changes or updates that have been made to a particular text or document. Here is an example: "The company's annual report has been substantially revised to include the latest financial data and performance metrics."
The fourth edition has been substantially revised and expanded to bring the content up to date with the current Scheme standard, the Revised6 Report on Scheme.
This third edition has been substantially revised and three brand new chapters have been added.
This account of appearance properties has been substantially revised and developed in Shoemaker's later work.
The text has been substantially revised in some chapters, taking into account the literature published in the mean time.
Figure 7 (previous Figure 6) has been substantially revised (new panels A and B) along with the text describing the logic behind the experiment.
This theory of media effects, in which the mass media has a direct and rapid influence on everyday understanding, has been substantially revised.
An assistant at K-19 Productions said the script had been substantially revised and that the veterans' concerns were groundless.
Many of them have been substantially revised under terms in the Indian Reorganization Act of 1934, however.
"These regulations have been substantially revised based on discussions with all interested parties in the wake of the problems manifest at Foxconn and Honda," said Ou Guangyuan, chairman of the standing committee of Guangdong's People's Congress.
Astrometric observations with the Hubble Space Telescope measured an inclination of 53° of the outer planet d, though this result relies on the precise orbital parameters which have been substantially revised since this was published.
This newly revised edition contains updated versions of all of the topics that were in the first edition and has been substantially expanded with an additional 5 chapters.
