The phrase "further refinement on" is correct and usable in written English.
It is typically used to indicate that additional improvements or modifications are being made to something that has already been refined. Example: The team requested further refinement on the design proposal before submitting it to the board for approval.
With further refinement for on-board application, the technology could lead to real-time ballast water screening to improve ship-specific management and control decisions.
Our future research will concentrate on further refinement of the proposed framework by applying and evaluating it on classes of larger scale and different topics.
Future work could be focused on further refinement of the structural model reported here, for example by using higher fidelity atomistic force field models, or perhaps by using methods that facilitate the enhanced sampling of structural configurations.
Future work should focus on further refinement of these techniques in an effort to improve the outcomes, along with successful translation to humans.
Further refinement of the modelling work on other semicrystalline polymers amenable to permanganic etching is also a possibility.
We have moved toward a further refinement of the assay based on these results.
Further refinement of our database based on new taxonomic and biogeographic data is both possible and desirable, but we predict that the general pattern resulting from this analysis will be confirmed as knowledge about Neotropical fishes increases.
Further refinement of this class of compounds on functional groups that are important determinants of their affinity for DYRK1A could lead to high affinity inhibitors of tau phosphorylation.
Further refinement of the systems should focus on both increasing human and financial resources and improving management practice.
