Sentence examples for further drafting from inspiring English sources

We don't feel there is any watering down". Further drafting between the summit sherpas – officials from each country who prepare the communique in advance – will take place over the next three weeks, and Downing Street is confident the language on aid will be toughened up.

Lieu went one step further, drafting an illustrated message to mock the president for his hostile comments to U.S. allies.

In December 1948, after further drafting and lobbying by Lemkin, the UN general assembly adopted the Convention on the Prevention and Punishment of the Crime of Genocide, which passed into law two years later.

MB and DK wrote the original draft of the paper, all authors contributed to further drafting.

AvS, PC and BP critically read each draft and contributed to the further drafting and revisions of the manuscript.

– The European Parliament must be fully involved in the further drafting of the report of the four Presidents, in line with the Community method; this involvement can be organised at working group level (preparatory work) as well as on the Presidential level (decision-taking).

A further draft of the dossier was sent to Mr Campbell and JIC members on September 19.

He might also have further drafts of beer (traditionally hopped) or ale (traditionally unhopped, and specified as Margate, Lambeth, China, or Hull).

Persia, on December 5, presented an ultimatum to Russia, demanding that the Russian troops should proceed no further and an undertaking that further drafts be countermanded.

Suggestions for a further draft: for me, it's better without that question ("did you survive?") in line three, so that when "did we survive?" comes in the last line it has greater impact.

For further drafts of The Empty-Souled Hobbyist (I can hardly stand to type the title out again!) it might be worth considering the combination of rhyme and enjambment that helps make Manny Blacksher's Livelihoods a compelling piece of work.