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On 22 August the draft proposal was rewritten with two changes from the previous draft.
In the new manuscript, the presentation of this material is very different from the previous draft.
In making this change, we moved Figure 1 from the previous draft into the Methods section and replaced it with a simpler figure (new Figure 2) showing raw data for excitatory input currents and spikes in the same cell, and quantifying the similarity of the spike response and excitatory input.
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Generous exclusivity provisions were one of the sticking points that led DeGette to withhold support for the previous draft, according to a representative from her office.
"Steven even said, 'I think I made a mistake with a couple of things I asked you guys to try.'" August took his favorite elements from the previous drafts, coming up with what he called "a best-of Big Fish script.
This was not clear in the previous draft.
The 90-man roster consists of players from the previous year, drafted and undrafted rookies and free agents from other teams.
This was an oversight from a previous draft: Figure 7 does not contain experimental data, and this has been removed from the manuscript.
The new proposal differs significantly from Ms. Reding's previous draft.
The authors gratefully acknowledge feedback from Dr. Rachel Sturke on a previous draft of this manuscript, and guidance from Dr. Rachel Sturke and Dr. Linda Kupfer of the Fogarty International Center on the framing and implementation of this study.
However, the previous total estimate of 536 R-like genes is significantly lower than the one from the finished genome (837), indicating that previous draft sequences did not provide sufficient information for capturing all candidate genes for disease resistance and, in addition, that gene finding methods are not directly comparable.
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