"for her revision" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it to refer to the action of examining or making changes to something that has already been written. For example, "She was working hard on her essay, so she set aside an afternoon for her revision."
We wish to acknowledge Dr. A. Gómez for her revision and valuable comments on a previous version of the manuscript.
We thank Nathalie Carrier from the Centre de Recherche Clinique Étienne-Lebel for her revision of the statistical analyses performed.
We thank Professor Yanxiu Liu for her revision of the language of this manuscript.
The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2474/14/52/prepub The authors wish to express their gratitude to Mrs. Linda Gerdsen-Drury, for her revision of English grammar and style.
The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1472-6939/11/21/prepub The author wishes to thank Carol Oberschmidt for her revision of the text.
Thanks to Tania Serrano, Jérôme Martin and Véronique Villalon for their help and Jo Ann Cahn for her careful revision of the manuscript.
Additional thanks to Julia Lohmann for her critical revision of the intellectual contact.
The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2458/11/224/prepub We thank Dr. Honghong Zhu for her critical revision.
The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-230X/13/51/prepub We thank Doctor Yanfang Zhao (Department of Health Statistics, Second Military Medical University, Shanghai, China) for her critical revision of the meta-analysis section.
We are grateful to QBP Juana Narvaez Morales, MVZ Rafael Leyva Muñoz, and MVZ Maria Antonieta Lopez Lopez for their technical assistance and discussions and Dr. Andrea De Vizcaya for her helpful revision of the manuscript.
The authors would also like to acknowledge Laurie Moore for her thoughtful revisions of this paper.
