How could it be rewritten into shorter, better sentences?
If you possess more than a passing familiarity with the band, I wouldn't even bother scrolling through the rest of this review, and I'd certainly avoid checking out the rating at the end of it because that first sentence, for better or worse, says everything that needs to be said about this album".
This prompts laughter around the table, and it becomes apparent that in what is a still an incredibly macho environment, the notion of talking through your feelings is seen as a sign of weakness, and schemes such as the peer mentoring and listeners are viewed more as a means to an end for better wages and lighter sentences.
We have changed this sentence for better clarity: "Strikingly, [IL-2]max scaled as a power law that could distinguish more than three orders of magnitude of input antigen dose, despite the aforementioned saturated dynamic range of early T cell responses".
As we waded through your 500 submissions, there were sentences that, for better or worse, jumped out at us, made the eyes do a double-take, like the sight of a dame that – ahh, never mind.
For better contrast to the following sentence, the word "female" should be inserted between the "elimination of " and "germinal stem cells" in the sentence "Heat-induced bam expression caused elimination of germinal stem cells while somatic stem cell numbers were not changed" in the third section.
In future work, we plan to develop an interactive UI for the algorithm to enable the user to guide iterative or recursive application of the method to the most interesting topics and leverage ongoing research in the area of topic models to arrive at topics that soften the bag of words assumption and describe topics with sentence phrases for better interpretability.
Furthermore, the system can also enable the researchers to measure the exact time consumed in any specific procedure in the marking process, including re-reading a particular sentence or paragraph for better understanding, thinking about certain problematic parts of the composition, jotting comments, recognizing and correcting errors and mistakes, etc.
For better reading, break your content into digestible sentences and bullet points.
It also means that – for better or worse – I can't let a sentence rest.
