Sentence examples for flawed screenplay from inspiring English sources

I wrote a very flawed screenplay several months ago.

Although the dialogue in the screenplay (by Itay Segal) is well written, "Yossi" is flawed by conceptual clichés.

The directorial debut of the cinematographer Wally Pfister is an ambitious, albeit flawed, attempt to dramatise what futurologists call the singularity, but what the screenplay by first-timer Jack Paglen insists on calling "transcendence": the moment when a computer network achieves greater-than-human intelligence.

Hitchcock has said that when his screenplays are finished, his films are perfect; they become flawed only during the execution.

It is probably flawed in that it depends on a deus ex machina in the form of a certain incriminating legal document which is rather casually crowbarred into the screenplay.

Albeit flawed.

Very flawed.

Flawed, perhaps?

They're flawed.

Flawed concept.

If you have trouble putting together a clear, compelling pitch of your movie, it may be because you have a serious flaw in your screenplay.