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The novel is sharp and precise, and here, the manic noticing of detail is cautious; here, the flat description performs the feeling of a hollowed-out, grieving man.
For all The Dream of the Celt's failings (leaden dialogue, repetitiveness, flat description rather than successful dramatising of the story's most potent moments), it has the most compelling hero of Vargas Llosa's oeuvre.
Cole prepares his effects so patiently and cumulatively, over many pages of relatively "flat" description, that the image of the old woman leaving as if for death, suspended like a mote in the music, seems not forced or ornamental but natural and almost inevitable.
The face is not a flat description but a marvellous three-dimensional portrait of a handsome Italian living in real time, muscles beneath the skin, five o'clock shadow, not merely the usual patch of grey paint but something emerging from within.
The style veers from flat description, as applied to monuments like the Duomo and the Vasari Corridor (where the sculptures are hidden in a secret room), to pure hyperbole, which works fine in action scenes but pumps up the characters to cartoon dimension.
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The crosscutting action sequences read like padded script, and the detailed but flat descriptions of characters and scenery could double as memos to the casting and production departments.
Moreover, popular 'theories' of digital learning (such as connectivism and connected learning) are little more than flat descriptions of the logistics of online information seeking and communication.
Specifically the fourth section, which I knew contained hundreds of pages filled with flat descriptions of murdered women.
It may be clever to paint Hillary Clinton as a doomed operatic figure or Barack Obama as "effete," but flat, reductionist descriptions of such complex individuals cheapen this incredibly historic moment.
The battle returned to the courts, with the arguments now spinning more on tape measurements and stock inventories than on inspectors' flat-toned descriptions of lap dances they had seen.
The chronology ends with the coroner's flat yet gruesome description of the half-decomposed corpse.
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