Sentence examples for first revising from inspiring English sources

Michael Kaminski, in The Secret History of Star Wars, offers evidence that issues in Anakin's fall to the dark side prompted Lucas to make massive story changes, first revising the opening sequence to have Palpatine kidnapped and his apprentice, Count Dooku, murdered by Anakin as the first act in the latter's turn towards the dark side.

Brazier and colleagues constructed an econometric model for predicting health state valuations by first revising the SF-36 into a health status measure with 6 domains called the SF-6D [ 10].

In February, before Advanced Micro first revised its outlook for first-quarter results, analysts expected a profit of 32 cents.

The law was first revised in 1831, when the initial copyright term was extended to 28 years.

When you read published papers you see the finished article, not the first draft, nor the first revise and resubmit, nor any of the intermediate versions – and you never see the failures.

The energy performance index OTTV was first revised to obtain a new performance index, ETTV for commercial buildings.

In the present study, we first revised and improved the concepts of radial Blaschke addition and harmonic Blaschke addition in an (L_{p}) space.

In this paper, we first revise and extend earlier works (Furumura and Kennett 2001; Hong 2010) into Lg wave propagation and then present a detailed Lg propagation map of the area around Japan, including Korea and parts of continental Asia.

It was expanded into the first Diagnostic and Statistical Manual (DSM) in 1952 and first revised (DSM-II) in 1968.

The manuscript was first revised critically by A-CS, MA, DS, RWH, BJ and DB.

In the original and first revised manuscript, we had adjusted the contour levels of Figures 2B,C to enable visualization of the weakest cross-peaks of interest.