Sentence examples for first draft of the script and from inspiring English sources
The character of Kramer, was not included in the first draft of the script, and in another draft he was called "Hoffman".
Chris and I work closely together developing a script for each piece, a script that includes the text that will appear on the screen, as well as ideas about music, colours, themes, images, etc; I write the first draft of the script and then we edit and expand it together.
A few changes were made; in the first draft of the script, George, Jerry, and Elaine entered the restaurant talking about their least favorite holiday.
The first draft of the script portrayed Leslie and Mark as slightly less likable characters.
In the first draft of the script, there was more back-and-forth, but I was kind of timid and disregarded much of it.
My first draft of the script was only six pages, and it was about Vin Diesel driving to get gas.
Sean Gray "The first draft of the script will go to Armando and he will feed in notes – 'less shits', 'too fucky' or just 'funnier' written in the margin.
Series creator Chris Carter approved the storyline, but the first draft of the script was met with disapproval by the writing staff, and the story was restructured and rewritten.
He turned in the idea of a cheap clip show to save money and wrote the first draft of the script, with Richard Manning and Hans Beimler conducting re-writes.
It was the final episode written by Maurice Hurley, who originated the idea and wrote the first draft of the script, with Hans Beimler and Richard Manning conducting re-writes.
