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Sudden endings can feel abrupt.
But transitions often feel abrupt.
The various homosexual and homophobic undercurrents sometimes feel abrupt.
This technique powerfully portrays the plight of both, although the switches in viewpoint occasionally feel abrupt and dislodge our emotional engagement.
The ending should be as strong as the rest of your book and not feel abrupt or disjointed.
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Against the backdrop of the ordinary, it often feels abrupt, exceptional.
The resolution -- in which Gert finds true love and reconciles with her mother -- feels abrupt and somewhat unconvincing.
The one structurally shaky moment comes in the transition back to the opening material; the switch feels abrupt, as if a tempo-changing gesture has gone missing.
But his leaps never felt abrupt: fidgeting strings, chattering percussion, a flatulent trombone and a cinematic gallop in triple time coexisted peaceably in his playfully surreal conception.
There is no redemption in this social satire: the end of the story feels abrupt and unsatisfying, and makes you re-evaluate everything that has come before.
Likewise, the ending, after many pages of strong plotting and dense description, feels abrupt and leaves too many questions un-answered, even after a close reading.
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