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At Conner Prairie, fixing this would mean integrating traditional exposition into the show.
This is a big problem, having to condense huge swathes of novelistic exposition into soundbite dialogue.
How do you condense the back story, all that descriptive texture and exposition, into dialogue?
Having stomped upstairs to bed, Charlie returns to thrust a big chunk of exposition into our laps.
And he probably would have received it had the screenwriter, Jessica Postigo Paquette, not been obliged to shoehorn a week's worth of exposition into two hours and change.
During the latest crackdown, the museum was taken over by the state, which turned the exposition into a cacophonous assemblage of artifacts.
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Entertainment-based video games have served as eye-opening, whimsical expositions into worlds we will never see in reality, and have established themselves as important parts of the mosaics of our lives.
There is a flavour of Jonathan Franzen here, in Eggers's knack of folding exposition lightly into the action.
The dialogue isn't particularly original ("We ain't gonna make it"), although it's probably accurate, and exposition incorporated into the dialogue isn't always gracefully done.
The novel's descriptions of the mill are painstakingly thorough, and exposition intrudes into the dialogue as Chace's characters inform one another (and us) of what's happening in the wider world.
The valor of her vulnerability takes the memoir out of the realm of simple exposition and into that finer, realer plane of the conveyance of authentic human truth.
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