Add images for explanation for the readers.
3) The writing is succinct but the paper is not always easy to follow and could benefit from more explanation for the general reader particularly in the Discussion.
Concerns: The writing is succinct but the paper is not always easy to follow and could benefit from more explanation for the general reader.
Reviewer #1: The writing is succinct but the paper is not always easy to follow and could benefit from more explanation for the general reader.
We have done our best to edit the manuscript for clarity and accessibility, in part by providing more explanation for the general reader in the Introduction, Methods, Discussion, and figure legends.
The first constitute descriptive studies, with no hypothesis or testing of explanations on why patterns exist, leaving policy explanations implicit for the reader to gauge.
Finally, a possible explanation for the lower inter-reader agreement in samples drawn after the administration of systemic treatment is the presence in these samples of granular CTCs that have been demonstrated to be mainly apoptotic, and to be a source of inter-reader disagreement in a previous study [ 23].
Without our remarkable pileup of family secrets?" These questions are unanswerable, as Shawn acknowledges, yet most of the book consists of the search for explanations, and the reader joins him in a free ramble across the fields of Freudianism, Darwinism, behaviorism and much else.
With this, the solution for every ({mathcal{A }_{k}}) is parameterized by an angular variable (phi _k) (for a detailed explanation, the reader is referred to [10]).
A little bit more details and explanation will make it easier for the reader to parse this rather dense description.
