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We have expanded explanations and have tried to make much clearer the basic thrust of the paper.
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An expanded explanation of the data as well as comprehensive analyses on how they were used can be found in the article titled "Ground-source heat pump systems: the effect of variable pipe separation in ground heat exchangers" (Makasis N, Narsilio GA, Bidarmaghz A, Johnston IW, 2018) [1].
Expanded explanation of the significance of the methodologies used and, in particular, the data analyses employed would make for a much improved manuscript.
An expanded explanation of the chemical analysis is provided in Additional files 1 and 2. Fish lines were maintained in the ALAAC accredited Smith College Zebrafish Facility using standard husbandry techniques ([ 125]; Zebrafish International Resource Center).
Author reply: With respect to the first sentence of this comment, we hope our expanded explanation as to how progressively greater enclosure will give progressively greater energetic benefit (Paragraph 70) provides the answer.
Expanded explanation of the economic modeling framework with a focus on the modifications made to the Emissions Prediction and Policy Analysis (EPPA) model, documentation of the methods used to integrate anaerobic digesters into an economic modeling framework, and an explanation of the alternative scenarios.
As the tip of the zoonotic iceberg expands, explanations should identify factors that determine growth in the submerged bulk (due mostly to biological factors that determine the virus transmission potential) and those that cause an increase in relative exposure above the surface (due more to factors that determine human contact with infected ticks, and also to human susceptibility to infection).
These are all good points and we appreciated the opportunity to both expand explanations and soften some of our conclusions.
We have also expanded the explanation there to clarify the model.
We have expanded this explanation in the discussion section of our revised manuscript.
In particular, we have expanded the explanation of the data behind new Figures 8 and 9 (infestations M1 and M4).
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