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All opening sci-fi shows face the problem of excess exposition.
The clunky transitions and excess exposition that are the hallmark of page-to-stage translations are mercifully absent.
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Furthermore, the findings of the present analysis are in line with earlier data suggesting harmful effects of excess catecholamine exposition in general critically ill patient populations.
He continued: "So it is a simple thing to point out that Uris often writes crudely, that his dialogue can be wooden, that his structure occasionally groans under the excess baggage of exposition and information.
Unfortunately, "Prometheus" falls on the side of excess, with a leaden yet hyperactive exposition of its frequently overblown (although sometimes poetic) text by Mr. Fabre and Jeroen Olyslaegers; a few overused theatrical ideas (sand, axes, bondage); and a surprisingly plodding pace.
During the eleven months of stone samples exposition in Oviedo no excesses in sulfur dioxide concentration were recorded by the monitoring station nearest to the Cathedral, both of the hourly and the daily limits (respectively 350 μgm−3 and 125 μgm−3) [29].
His exposition, full of the sort of excess detail that mathematicians call "hair," is marred by confusions and errors.
Dr. Lachin's exposition of the theory that the apparent excess of mortality in ACCORD was due to the play of chance is very welcome.
To avoid an excess of mathematical formalism, we do not follow the Cambanis exposition literally.
The population risk of diabetes attributable to excess body weight was calculated as p d (RR - 1)/RR; where p d = prevalence of exposition among cases, and RR = multivariable-adjusted hazard ratio of diabetes in exposed versus non-exposed participants [ 36].
This detailed exposition shows how its ideals formed the basis of today's liberal democracies and how its excesses were a forerunner of 20th-century repressions.
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