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"It's harder to create emotional through lines without a plot.
Ms. Noll and Mr. Petkoff's relationship, that of bizarrely attracted opposites, becomes the show's most persuasive emotional through line.
"Hopefully, an actor can provide some sort of emotional through line and maybe a little more depth.
Though Joy Division and Danny Brown – or even post-punk and rap – may seem to exist on opposite ends of the spectrum, there is definitely an emotional through line that links the two.
Mr. Dorff's hot-wired portrayal of a prisoner under physical and psychic siege gives "Felon" its emotional through line as Wade's attitude metamorphoses from stunned disbelief, to terror, to despair, to fury and finally to hope.
But the character's humanity tends to get lost for long stretches; the performance lacks the kind of emotional through line it needs, although it cannot be easy to establish an inner core for a woman who keeps morphing into a cartoon.
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Billie, says Potts, is "the emotional through-line" as Scully becomes increasingly infantilised.
"You had to find an emotional through-line to that, kind of a journey that he goes on.
Paul Brooks wanted the trailer to be primarily comedic, but Palen felt that it needed an emotional through-line, "the stuff that tugs on the ovary".
"City of God" sorely lacks the neatly interlocking puzzle pieces of "Poets," -- the emotional through-line and organic sense of coherence that lay beneath its innovative structure.
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