After Ono married John Lennon, Simon & Schuster published a new edition of "Grapefruit," though this version included some editorial revisions and additions — the most prominent among the latter being a short foreword authored by Lennon.
With other, and more marketable, kinds of program, this is, of course, not only a normal procedure but a mandatory one, yet it is one that Friendly stubbornly holds out against, on the ground that it might tempt advertisers to suggest editorial revisions as a condition of their sponsorship.
JM wrote the introduction and conclusion, provided experience and insight regarding the content, provided editorial revisions and images, and approved the final submission.
Paul Kraus, Razi: Opera Philosophica (Cairo, n.p., 1939), p. 27; editorial revisions by Dimitri Gutas in Arabica 24 (1977), 91 93; Arthur J. Arberry, trans., The Spiritual Physick of Rhazes (London, 1950), p. 29.
An important consequence of this dependence, however, was the editorial revisions to which key essays in which Benjamin developed his materialist theory of art were subjected, such as 'The Work of Art in the Age of Its Technical Reproducibility' and those on Baudelaire and Paris that grew out of The Arcades Project.
The Hay draft differed from the version of the Gettysburg Address published by John Nicolay in 1894 in a number of significant ways: it was written on a different type of paper, had a different number of words per line and number of lines, and contained editorial revisions in Lincoln's hand.
The unwritten rules were undergoing editorial revision before Hamels was even born.
After everything predicted in the book came to nothing, Lindsey rewrote and "updated" his "interpretations" in many sequels, in what must have been some sort of record for practicing George Orwell's idea of "doublethink" via editorial revision of ever-changing "facts".
The authors thank Pr John Murray, Pr Donald Enarson, Dr Pierre Chauvin and Dr Veronique Massari for interesting suggestions and Mahinda Siriwardana for editorial revision.
We thank Dr. Legendre for editorial revision of this manuscript.
FA: Supervision of the project and editorial revision of draft papers.
