Avital O'Glasser for editing assistance.
English language editing assistance was provided by Alexandra Tavernier.
The author thanks Cindy Clark, NIH Library Writing Center, for manuscript editing assistance.
We thank Douglas Joubert, NIH Library Writing Center, for manuscript editing assistance.
English language editing assistance was provided by John Giba, independent medical writer.
Finally, I am thankful to Alison Elks of Magenta Publishing for providing language editing assistance.
A few questions about the assessment and topic matter clearly demonstrated that the student had an excellent understanding of the material, could articulate how they had improved between the two assignments, and that the explanation for the language shift was the result of editing assistance.
Thanks to Rachel Hockett for editing assistance on this article.
(Editing assistance from Hugh Iglarsh, writer/editor/citizen based in Chicago. A shorter version of this piece originally appeared as an op-ed in the Minneapolis Star Tribune on January 16 "Coleen Rowley: We're conflating proper dissent and terrorism").
The authors also thank Rhoda E. Perozzi and Edmund F. Perozzi for English editing assistance.
We are grateful to Dr Rasika (Gap Junction) for English editing assistance.
