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The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2458/13/557/prepub The authors thank the University of Oklahoma, Health Sciences Center, for providing an office and James W. Mold, MD, MPH for his helpful comments on earlier drafts on this manuscript.

All authors provided intellectual input on the design, feedback on drafts of this protocol, and approved the final manuscript.

We thank David Bodznick, Brandon Brown and Marcello Camperi for sharing their insights on the physics of electroreceptors, and valuable comments on drafts of this manuscript.

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M.A.S. thanks Drs. H. Campos and W. Parrott for their comments and insights on drafts of this manuscript.

We thank Tim Wade and Elizabeth Doyle of EPA, and Prof. Dale Hattis of Clark University for their helpful comments on drafts of this manuscript.

Ellen Brantlinger, Patrick Brantlinger, Angana Chatterji, Eva Cherniavsky, Margo Crawford, Laura E. Lyons, and Richard Miller provided valuable suggestions on drafts of this article.

I am grateful to Jacob Earl, Anne Jeffrey, Alex Pruss, and Ed Wierenga for comments on drafts of this entry.

Many thanks to David Chalmers and to Bill Fish for valuable detailed comments and suggestions on drafts of this entry.

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Seth Coleman, Rongfeng Cui, Daphne Soares, and two anonymous reviewers provided detailed comments on drafts of this manuscript.